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Rorek's Story Part 1

Wed Apr 30, 2008, 12:55 PM
  • Mood: Amused
  • Listening to: System Of a Down - B.Y.O.B
  • Reading: Your mind
  • Watching: Drunkerds
  • Playing: Kick the baby
  • Eating: PENNIES!
  • Drinking: nothing... I'm thirsty T_T
The dull white light in the endless mass of darkness would gleem slightly brighter today then usual. The small town below upon the island known as Umunga would seem calm at this time of year. The Atmosphere was dry but hardly considered hot, at most it could be cosidered humid. The town varied in many shaped houses and buildings, that all seemed to be centered around the large patch of earth were nothing grows, it was marked with many blood stains and the smell of decay and sweat.

One building would tower above all others, this buiding had branded upon it no names, no sign to indicate it's use. The doors to this large building seemed to open as yet nothing immerge. The mumblings of perhaps a worker could be heard as then a red mass wa thrown out of the building and upon the street. A rather deformed looking being followed after the red mass and stopped at the foot of the door way. He was what would be best described as obese with many different scars upon his exposed torso, his left arm appeared to be robotic with what seemed to be specialized surgery tools and probing utensals. His legs appeared to be that of some sort of goat, as his legs were furred with hoofs for feet.

The being seemed to snarl slightly, exposing a row of out of place teeth that would seem to be a bother to their owner rather then a help.
"Your on your own now kid!"
The being mumbled as he would turn his back upon the red mass and the doors would begin to close while the goat man descended into darkness. The red mass was now left upon the empty street as it began to move.

It would now be apparent the red mass was acturally a living being as a pair of elbows pushed up the back of a red jacket. As it pushed itself up its arms were wobbling as a fingerless gloved hand clenched at the street beneath it. This being appeared to be humaniod as it would begin to get to one knee, this proved to be a struggle for it as it would then push up quickly using its arms. As it did this its knees would straighten out as ir would begin to fall back, the being then would lean forward to steady itself as it would stumble forward to save itself an embarressing fall. A long piece of fabric covered its face as then it would reach up and grasp at the fabric, pulling it back over its head to lay upon the wind, fluttering behind it.

A head of dirty blonde hair cought the light of the day, allowing it to glisten slightly. below a scruff of blonde hair would be a band of red fabric above its brow, and below its hair line. It would now be apparent this being was a male as his body structure would now become clear. His red jacket would be seen in its full brilliant colour as the light bounced against the fabric. The same could be said for the fabric that laid upon is shoulders, it would appear to be connected to the fabric around his head and the loose fabric fluttering in the breeze. His trousers would also be of the same tone of red, making it seem like a set of sorts. A pair of steel toe capped boots would allow the exposed metal toes to glisten nicely in the natural light.

A pair of soothing royal blue eyes would seem to glow gracously against the males light tanned skin. A pair of pointed ears would poke out from under his layers of messy hair and the scarf that would lay upon his head and shoulders. His ears seemed to twich slightly as he looked back towards the doors, as though he felt lost. which was strange for someone who looked sixteen years of age. His slender lips would part, allow his flawless white teeth to slightly catch the suns rays as a deep sigh passed the males lips. His eyes directed towards the street as the wind seemed to be pushing him back.
"Can't turn back now..."
The male would then step against the wind, walking down the street towards the center of this strange town. A longing gleemed in his eyes, a curiousity seemed to beam from his being as he advanced. This man was no longer in a place he would call 'home', so he now aims to reach out, and grasp a new understanding.

((To be continued, I know this isn't long but thats why I'm putting it in parts, I know there must have been quite a few gramma mistakes aswell as spelling but I'll go over them later.))

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  • Interests: Gaming, Roleplaying, Writing, General art
  • Favourite genre of music: Rock, Metal
  • MP3 player of choice: if it works, I'll use it.
  • Shell of choice: One with lots of storage space XP
  • Favourite game: KICK THE BABY!
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  • MSN: nj_rorek@hotmail.co.uk

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:icondarkdragon-alchemist:
Hey How are you XD

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Ignoring the words of your obnoxious little brother;
kill or be killed spilled the words from your mother.
:icon0fatman0:
hai ^^
hows you?
xx D

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~If they dont love you, make them hate~
:iconrorekorobus:
Real late reply, I hardly ever look at this thing anymore @_@. anyway I'm good thanks, you?

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I woke up with a ... Mild hangover...
~Flash back.~
BBBBWWWWWWLLLLAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!
:icon0fatman0:
lol fair enough
im fandabadosey thanks ^^
what you doing these days?
xx D

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~If they dont love you, make them hate~
:iconcharmed-tuesday:
hey nathan, its Ev, hows you?

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However, in the absence of anything interesting to say, I would like anyone who reads this to please ignore the fact that this is particularly unnecessary and simply serves to waste space.
:iconrorekorobus:
I'm alright thanks, you?

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I woke up with a ... Mild hangover...
~Flash back.~
BBBBWWWWWWLLLLAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!
:iconcharmed-tuesday:
im good, what you up to?

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I felt the need to update my signature.

However, in the absence of anything interesting to say, I would like anyone who reads this to please ignore the fact that this is particularly unnecessary and simply serves to waste space.
:iconrorekorobus:
hmm this that and the other thing that people do >_> you?

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I woke up with a ... Mild hangover...
~Flash back.~
BBBBWWWWWWLLLLAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!
:iconcharmed-tuesday:
not much, just on the computer and doodling...

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I felt the need to update my signature.

However, in the absence of anything interesting to say, I would like anyone who reads this to please ignore the fact that this is particularly unnecessary and simply serves to waste space.

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